There you are....
This is my first post. i still dont know what i want to post about. it is now just flowing from my mind to my finger in very very hilarious speed. Thats what i called with #FingerThought. In order to type what i thinking about, sometime im shock for what im thinking, and im shock for what i type and i tweet. so guys, deal with it. deal with what i thought. lol
Today weather from Weather.com is 65 F with very very sunny. the sky is cleansheet, no even single cloud. its nice weather actually. good to hang out with friends. get some ice or go to beach near you.
I am so sorry if you have problem read my blog. because im not good writer. my background education not jurnalism. so please pardon me if my post make you headache.
the idea from my new friend on twitter. in my next future post i think i want to review anything what im watching, what im listening, what im buying, what iam read, what im doing. anything. review with my kind of writing.
and finally, welcome to my blog, and i really hope you enjoy with my post..
Okay so I am leaving this comment for you to improve your English, feel free to delete it as soon as you corrected your little mistakes. As I can see here you sometimes forget to add a verb "my education IS not journalism", "this idea IS from my new friend", or an article "I'm not A good writer", "what I'm listening TO", "in A very very hilarious speed" or use a wrong term "this is what I CALL...", or use the wrong verb such as "if my post GIVES you A headache." Sometimes it is a little bit ambigous (did you want to say "I'm IN shock" or "I am SHOCKED" ?). And to end, I think you meant "I realy hope you enjoy WHAT I post". I hope you don't take this as an offense, I just hope you understand that a better language can drag in more people to read your posts ! Have a nice day ! :)
ReplyDeleteokeeeyy... thank you for the advice :) im still to learn about writing..
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